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flamingellis
2016-09-23 07:09:51
(1) The torrential rain that postponed the festival has finally ceased, but it left a trail of disaster. (2) Rescheduling the annual Pickle Palooza is going to be a huge undertaking. (3) The ceremonial pickle podium floated off during the downpour and hasn’t been seen since. (4) A flock of ducks have taken up residence on it and have been chasing off anyone who comes near them. (5) And, there is a puddle the size of a small lake where the festival field was. What is the best way to reorganize the paragraph to make the writer’s viewpoint clear to the reader? 1, 3, 4, 2, 5 2, 1, 3, 5, 4 3, 1, 2, 4, 5 4, 5, 1, 2, 3
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Taylorbrooke415
2016-09-23 10:04:02

I would say 1,2 5,3 and 4 because first the torrential downpour has to be mentioned, then the difficulty of re-scheduling the event, then huge puddle, then the pickle podium and the ducks so that points points 5, 3 and 4 explain why it will be a major re-scheduling job. 

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